User blog comment:FanofRPGs/The adventure of Bob/@comment-27151416-20160331021930

I was finding this quite dull, this story's very foundation starting from the controversial at best, ridiculous at worst ending of your last story. The name of the villain, as well, seemed a bit much, like you as an author was desperatedly trying to recapture the fun of your early story's beginning.

However... The twist at the very end came at a legitimate shock, and unlike your previous story's ending, I mean in a good way. Bob was stripped of all she knows, and faces the conflict of being alone as a measely 3-Dimensional MFTL+ Reality Warper. I look forward to the journey in which she (May I call her B-Chan?) regains her omnipotence, and gets her revenge on the bad guy.

Mortisaku Hirochi is also intriguing. He has quite the unique and developed backstory, and I look forward for his feats and his relationship with B-Chan. The battle at the end of Chapter 2 was quite excellent, and it left me thrilled for what's to come.

Well done, good sure. Continue like this and you'll create a Magnum Opus.

Pie / 10